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Core Strategy Consultation on Strategy Directions 2008

Representation ID: 19728

Received: 02/03/2009

Respondent: Messrs. Chishick, Commotto and Terry

Representation Summary:

Jargon
The accessibility of the document is also obstructed by the unnecessary jargon. Context, Vision, Spatial Strategy, Strategy Themes, Scope, Issues, Aims and Objectives are MBA-speak that turns off most normal people. On the other hand, phrases such as "place-shaping" masquerade as plain language but are so vague as to be meaningless.